Tuesday 17 June 2008

Practically perfect poems



Mr Brook's literacy group have been writing more great poems.
Everybody wrote their own version of a poem called 'I'm practically perfect...'

NAME:IZZY

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
There’s not a thing that I neglect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
Take a good look and you will see,

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
I give money to charity I do my part,

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
The teachers encourage me and are full of praise

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
I take pride in my appearance I’m a beautiful sight

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
So I’ve redone my homework with help from dad as well
NAME:_Alfie Hulbert _

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I’m sure when we meet this you’ll detect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
I’m a happy fellow and love company.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
I like everyone and I love taking part.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
So at home all I do is revise for days

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
My food is free range and I love flying kites.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
So on my front door I have a gold bell.

NAME Guy

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I’m practically perfect in every aspect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
I’m wonderful you could not disagree.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
Though sometimes I may do a massive loud fart!

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
So I must keep working hard for the next few days.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
I had a nice car and it gave me a fright.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
Although I almost fell down a stinky well.


NAME: Clem Routledge
I'm practically perfect in every respect.
There’s no part of my life that I’d ever neglect

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
That I have a god like personality

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
I’m superb at all music and legend in art.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
Everything’s easy nothing can faze

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
My shades are dead black , my suits are bright white

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
That I am always the greatest ,I’ll always do WELL


NAME: Rob Scott

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I’m sure that this fact is not incorrect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
That you would really like to be me!

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart
Every one says I’m really smart.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
For my fantastic short essays.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
I really am quite a sight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
But how in the room just did that big smell


NAME: Blane

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
Apart from that little something you call a spec

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
I am a bit wobbly when I drink tea

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
I am good at the game you play with a dart

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
Apart from all of my jumbo holidays

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
Even when I fly the great big jumbo kite

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell
Even the smell of my feet that I treat with jell


NAME:________James bs


I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I have got to get everything perfect.
As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
That I will definitely flee.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
That I play an important part.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
I only get A’s on certain days.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
My jeans do fit, just a bit tight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
The toys I have got, I’m going to sell.



Jake L

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
Apart from me looking like a big insect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
That I am a math boffin for all to see.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
In the school production I played a huge part.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
When an exam is near I count up the days.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
When I’m at high school I’ll keep my tie tight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell
I can do everything and do it all well.

NAME:__Emelia__

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I have beautiful eyes and quite a long neck.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
You’ll love every minute in my company.

I'm pretty and rich, with a generous heart.
I’m fabulous rich and incredibly smart.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
My teachers all love me and give constant praise.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
I shop in the posh shops I look quite a sight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
The only bad thing is my horrible smell.


NAME: Danny Smith

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
I’m perfectly behaved in every aspect.

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree.
I have a distinctive science degree.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
I always nip down to spend at the minute mart

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
In the afternoon I love to star gaze.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
So that is why hate to be in a fight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
I a legend in football as well.

NAME: Amy Harold_

I'm practically perfect in every respect.
Yes really, I ask you, what did you expect?

As soon as you know me I'm sure you'll agree
I can tell you one small thing and you will see.

I'm handsome and rich, with a generous heart.
In the school plays, I always get the best part.

At school, in my classes, I only get A's.
We have tests every week on every Thursday.

My clothes are expensive. My hair is just right.
I can promise you that I look a great sight.

I'm practically perfect. I'm sure you could tell.
I can do anything especially spell.